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Christmas edition of All Year Round (1863) |
I recently read Charles Dickens’s Mrs Lirriper’s Lodgings (1863) for the first time. Initially
published in a Christmas edition of Dickens’s publication – All Year Round – this first person
story, narrated by landlady Emma Lirriper, forms the introduction to a series
of stories about her lodgers by other writers, including Elizabeth Gaskell and
Charles Collins (brother of Wilkie, who had married Dickens’s daughter Kate in
1860). Mrs Lirriper is a charming, believable and funny narrator, and the story
displays all Dickens’s artistry in crafting a first person voice. Before
approaching novel-length first person narrators – Esther in her half of Bleak House (1852-3), David in David Copperfield (1850) – it could help
students to unpack what Dickens does in a shorter piece with a first person
speaker. And, as a writer, reading Dickens while paying attention to his narrative
techniques, is always a brilliant way to learn.
1. Not getting too ‘literary’:
Letting your narrator sound too much like a ‘writer’ (especially when they
are meant to be unused to writing like Emma Lirriper) ruins believability. And
yet you don’t want to write badly or put
off readers. Dickens deals with this issue deftly. The mood needed for the
arrival of the Edson couple needs to be a sombre one – given later events – for
the success of the story. But it would be out of character for Mrs Lirriper to
launch into a lengthy description. This technique is unavailable in this type
of narration. To get around this Dickens inserts discussion of the weather into
the course of Emma’s story, incorporating details which readers will interpret
as indicating a certain mood into the very fabric of the story:
‘I well remember that I had been looking out of the window
and had watched them [the Edsons] and the heavy sleet driving down the street
together looking for bills.’
The sleet shares its position, even grammatically with the
story’s characters and Dickens is able to convey mood without extraneous passages
of description. Another easy way to show your narrator is ‘unused’ to writing
is to use long sentences more frequently. Ever the fan of a long sentence, even
when writing in third person, Dickens does this even more here. Take the full
sentence which the quote above comes from:
‘It was the third year nearly up of the Major’s being in the
parlours that early one morning in the month of February when Parliament was
coming on and you may therefore suppose a number of impostors were about ready
to take hold of anything they could get, a gentleman and a lady from the
country came in to view the Second, and I well remember that I had been looking
out of the window and had watched them and the heavy sleet driving down the
street together looking for bills.’
Mrs Lirriper tells everything we need to know for the
narrative – the relation this incident bears to her previous topic (the arrival
of the Major), the time of year and day at which it took place (early and in
February), her own state of mind (suspicious at possible ‘impostors’), and what
she knew of the couple at the time (i.e. not much). As we have seen above, the
sentence also includes narrative markers of the mood which the story is
designed to create, framed as the artless result of Mrs Lirriper’s natural
approach to storytelling, not as a Dickensian intrusion. However, by piling
these details (all of which point to sophisticated
narrative) into multiple clauses, which take a while for us to unpack, Dickens
maintains our faith in Emma Lirriper as a real non-literary narrator.
2. Have your
narrator make mistakes: Whatever the character of a first person narrator,
you often find they are fond of digression. Mrs Lirriper pulls herself up
repeatedly (‘But it was about the Lodgings that I was intending to hold forth-’)
for going off topic, when, of course, Dickens’s ‘real’ topic is what these
digressions reveal about his narrator as character. A narrator needs to be
unaware that they are the writer’s subject and so self-reproach about
digression is a helpful shortcut to creating this effect. Digression and
correction are also valuable tools for making your narrative resemble speech
patterns – something Dickens employs masterfully for humorous effect:
‘Norfolk is a delightful street to lodge in – provided you
don’t go lower down’
Emma’s correction here is not just a dig at the woman who
provides lodgings at the other end of the street – the whole section following
goes on to suggest the street is less than delightful. Another instance is
when, talking of her adopted grandson, she tells us he was ‘always good and
minding what he was told (upon the whole)’. A narrator’s self –correction and
even contradiction bizarrely confirms their honesty to a reader.
3. Give your
narrator markers of an individual voice: In real life, people repeat themselves
– they have favoured words and phrases. So does a Dickensian narrator. The
trick is not overdoing it. Mrs Lirriper uses set phrases of set people. Mr
Lirriper (deceased) is always referred to as ‘a handsome figure of a man’; her grandchild
is ‘a remarkable boy’. Repetition gives us familiarity with her character. It
can also serve for emphasis – as when Emma uses the word ‘mope’ (and variants)
to describe the behaviour of the Major seven times in the course of one page. Another
easy way of individuating a narrator’s voice is to have them use colloquialisms,
which will further distinguish them from the typical third person narrator. Mrs
Lirriper tells us ‘my mind had been all in a maze’ and complains of ‘the mud
and mizzle’. But, importantly, she also demonstrates an awareness that her
language is not always suited for a literary narrative:
‘a thought which I think must have been doing about looking
for an owner somewhere dropped into my old noddle if you will excuse the expression.’ [emphasis mine]
It is this awareness which ensures that Dickens story doesn't
appear parodic.
4. Handling simile
and metaphor. This is obviously linked to the avoidance of the literary I
dealt with in Point 1. Dickens has several strategies for introducing literary
comparisons without undermining first person narrative coherence. The first
option is to source your objects of comparison from within the speaker’s realm of experience:
‘he wrote and wrote and wrote with his pen scratching like
rats behind the wainscot.’
Another is to show your narrator is aware when their
comparisons don’t quite come off or need clarification:
‘in summer we were as happy as the days were long, and in
winter we were as happy as the days were short’
Emma is not a writer. She is more literal. And so she
modifies an existing comparison, hoping to promote clarity. A final (and
comedic) strategy is to have your narrator lose sight of their own comparison,
digress without completing a simile or metaphor:
‘Girls as I was beginning to remark are one of your first
and your lasting troubles, being like your teeth which begin with convulsions
and never cease tormenting you from the time you cut them till they cut you,
and then you don’t want to part with them which seems hard but we must all
succumb or buy artificial, and even where you get a will nine times out of ten
you get a dirty face with it and naturally lodgers do not like good society to
be shown in with a smear of black across the nose or a smudgy eyebrow.’
This comparison begins clearly. Servant girls and teeth are
both trouble – painful to obtain but then dreadful to lose. But Mrs Lirriper
gets so wrapped up talking about teeth, Dickens has her forget they are part of
a metaphor (‘we must all succumb and buy artificial’). When she returns to talk
of the girls, she forgets the teeth all together. Their dirty faces have no
point of comparison within the world of dental hygiene.
Conclusion: Near
the close of her story, Mrs Lirriper quotes the Major: "Spoken Madam’ says the
Major ‘like Emma Lirriper." Examining how Mrs Lirriper speaks and why this is
central to the story is vital for unpacking Dickens’s methods.